Adjectives and Adverbs

THE CREEPY VERSION

The sky soon became a threateningly deep colour. A bitter wind sent gloomy clouds racing in front of the eerily glowing moon and large, icy raindrops began to fall. The travellers looked desperately ahead for somewhere to shelter. When they reached the narrow pathway they failed, at first, to notice how neglected it was, but blindly followed it, expecting to find a house at the end. They paused uncertainly at the foot of a flight of crumbling stone steps rising beneath a forbidding panelled door. Shivering, they tugged at the rusty bell-pull and heard its hammering tones echo around the hall inside. Almost immediately, the door swung open.

THE ROMANTIC VERSION

The sky soon became a beautifully deep colour. A gentle wind sent fluffy clouds racing in front of the brightly glowing moon and large, refreshing raindrops began to fall. The travellers looked laughingly ahead for somewhere to shelter. When they reached the narrow pathway they failed, at first, to notice how pretty it was, but happily followed it, expecting to find a house at the end. They paused hopefully at the foot of a flight of neat stone steps rising beneath a modern panelled door. Laughing, they tugged at the charming bell-pull and heard its musical tones tinkle around the hall inside. Almost immediately, the door swung open.

Share this post